林晴音乐考研闽南师范大学音乐学院2021…来自林晴音乐考研…(北京林晴音乐考研)
考研英语二大作文
第一篇：网络游戏
directions:
write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
interpret the chart, and
give your comments
you should write about 150 words.
预测范文
the column chart reveals the market size of web game in china from the first quarter of 2010 to the second quarter of 2011. during the period of one and a half years, there has been a sudden jump market size from 520 yuan to 820 million yuan, a rise of 300 million, at the year-on-year growth rate of more than 50%.
when computer’s entertaining function is highly spoken of, such a problem does deserve our serious concern. first and foremost, the most serious harm of web games come from their contents, which greatly affect children’s mental health. the majority of games involve violence, such as fighting and killing. to win or kill their opponents, children are permitted to use all various tools like guns, knives and bombs. when they are enjoying the pleasure of success, a violent turn of mind is developed and rooted in them, which may induce future violent behavior in their real life. what is more, being indulged in web games also does harm to children’s physical health. the radiation from the computer can arouse many uncomfortable feelings, such as a headache, poor eyesight and dizziness. being lack of sleep and skipping meals, children are more inclined to get irritable and suffer from severe malnutrition.
of course, it is not the end of the story. being indulged in web games also affects children’s study, and their communication with others. all these facts indicate that our society should strengthen the regulation of web games. (247 words)
参考译文
上幅柱状图揭示了2010年第一季度至2011年第二季度中国网页游戏的市场规模。在这一年半之中，市场规模急剧增长，从5.2亿元猛增到8.2亿元，增长了3亿元，同比增长率超出50%。
当大家都盛赞电脑的娱乐功能时，这个问题确实值得我们认真关注。首先且最重要的是，网络游戏最严重的危害来自于其内容，极大影响了孩子们的心理健康。大多数游戏涉及暴力，例如打斗和杀人。为了获胜或杀掉对手，允许孩子们使用枪、刀、炸弹等各种工具。当他们享受胜利的喜悦之时，心中萌生了暴力思想且这种思想变得根深蒂固，这可能会引发他们在未来现实生活中的暴力行为。此外，沉迷于网页游戏也会损害孩子们的生理健康。电脑辐射能够引起很多不适反应，例如头疼、视力下降以及眩晕。由于缺乏睡眠和不吃饭，孩子们更加容易变得脾气暴躁，并饱受严重的营养不良的折磨。
当然，事情不止如此。沉迷于网页游戏也会影响孩子们的学习以及与他人的沟通。所有这些事实都表明我们的应该对网页游戏加强管理。
亮点表达
column chart柱状图 reveal描述 web game网页游戏 quarter季度 sudden急剧的 jump增长 million百万 year-on-year同比 growth rate增长率 entertaining娱乐的 function功能 highly高度地 speak of赞扬 deserve值得 serious concern严肃关注 first and foremost首先 harm危害 internet games网络游戏 content内容 affect影响 the majority of大多数 involve涉及 violence暴力 opponent对手 permit允许 means方式 gun枪 bomb炸弹 pleasure快乐 violent暴力的 root扎根 induce引起 behavior行为 what is more此外 do harm to危害 physical health生理健康 radiation辐射 arouse引起 uncomfortable不适的 feeling反应 headache头疼 poor eyesight视力下降 be inclined to容易 irritable暴怒的 suffer from遭受 severe严重的 malnutrition营养不良 of course当然 communication沟通 indicate证明 manage控制
道长点评
考研写作已经五次考察网络或手机的话题，分别是：2009年“网络的近与远”，2009mba“手机短信”，2010年英语（二）“手机入网”，2015年英语（一）“手机时代的聚会”，2020年英语（二）“手机阅读”，希望考生引起高度重视。
佳句拓展
1. the majority of modern-day games are based on fantasy and they cannot teach us much about life. 如今多数游戏都基于虚幻，它们无法教会我们太多关于人生的事情。
2. a good many middle school and high school boys spend numerous weekend hours glued to their mobile phones, playing the latest fantasy games. 许多初高中男生周末很多时间都黏在手机跟前，玩最新的虚幻游戏。
3. many outstanding students flunked because they could not concentrate on study for being too indulged in mobile games. 很多优秀学生考试不及格，是因为他们太沉迷于手机游戏而无法专心学习。
第二篇：扶贫成就
directions:
write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
1）interpret the chart, and
2）give your comments
you should write about 150 words.
预测范文
the diagram above clearly reflects that china has made tremendous achievements in poverty alleviation from 2012 to 2020. during this period, china’s impoverished rural population decreased considerably from nearly 100 million to zero, a decline of 100 million. at the same time, the poverty headcount ratio also fell from approximately 10% to almost 0%.
several primary factors that account for the above-mentioned changes could be summarized as follows. to begin with, the authorities concerned in china have adopted a combination of conventional and innovative approaches, which have helped improve rural education and healthcare. what is more, our country has put great emphasis on infrastructure establishment in poor rural areas, which has effectively bridged the gap between the rich and the poor. last but not least, the achievements are attributed to china’ speedy economic development during the past several decades.
in short, china’s poverty alleviation campaign is particularly vital, both nationally and internationally. first of all, the anti-poverty achievements allow more people to enjoy the advantages of its economic boom. in addition, the chinese government has fulfilled its promise of lifting the whole people out of poverty.
参考译文
上幅图表清楚地揭示了2012年到2020年间中国在扶贫方面取得的巨大成就。在此期间，中国的农村贫困人口从大约1亿人大幅减少到几乎清零，贫困人口减少了近1亿人。与此同时，贫困人口比例从大约10%下降到几乎为零。
促成上述变化的主要原因可以概括如下。首先，中国有关当局结合传统方法和创新方法， 助改善了农村地区的教育和医疗水平。其次，我们的国家非常重视贫困乡村地区的基础设施建设，有效地消除了贫富差距。最后，这一成就归功于过去几十年中国经济的快速发展。
总之，中国的扶贫战役对我国和世界都极为重要。首先，扶贫成就让更多的人享受到经济繁荣的好处。其次，中国政府实现了全民脱贫的诺言。
亮点表达
diagram图表 reflect显示 make tremendous achievements获得巨大成就 poverty alleviation扶贫 during the period在此期间 impoverished rural population贫困乡村人口 decrease considerably急剧下降 decline减少 at the same time与此同时 the poverty headcount ratio贫困人口比例approximately大约 primary factors主要原因 account for促成 above-mentioned change上述变化 summarize概括 as follows如下 to begin with首先 the authorities concerned有关当局 adopt采取 combination结合 conventional传统的 innovative创新的 approach方法 improve改善 healthcare医疗 what is more此外 put great emphasis on非常重视 infrastructure establishment基础设施建设 poor rural areas贫困乡村地区 effectively有效地 bridge the gap弥合差距 last but not least最后 are attributed to归功于 speedy economic development迅速的经济发展 during the past several decades在过去几十年 in short总之 campaign战役 particularly vital非常重要 first of all首先 the anti-poverty achievements扶贫成就 advantage优点 economic boom经济繁荣 in addition其次 fulfill its promise实现诺言 lift the whole people out of poverty全民脱贫
道长点评
国内写作考试已经三次考察城乡差别这一话题，分别是：1991年考研写作“住在哪里——城市还是乡村？”，2014年英语（二）大作文“中国城镇和乡村人口”，以及2021年6月六级写作“中国扶贫成就”。
佳句拓展
1. enhancing the quality of life in poor areas contributes greatly to regional stability. 提升农村贫困人口的生活水平非常有助于地区稳定。
2. having witnessed the remarkable achievements in poverty alleviation, we have every reason to believe that we people will lead a richer and better life, and our great country will become more thriving and prosperous. 目睹了扶贫方面取得的杰出成就，我们有理由相信我们将过上更加富裕美好的生活。我们伟大的国家将会变得更加繁荣兴旺。
3. china increased its rural employment rate by boosting labor-intensive industries and sent its government officials to work in remote areas. 中国通过发展劳动密集型产业提高农村人口就业率，同时也派遣官员到偏远地区工作。
第三篇：教育-考研
directions:
in this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following diagram. describe the diagram and analyze the possible causes. you should write at least 150 words.
2010-2016年全国会计硕士招生录取人数
2010-2016年全国会计硕士招生录取人数
预测范文
the diagram above clearly illustrates that dramatic elevation has occurred in the recruitment of master of professional accounting (mpacc) from 2010 to 2016. in 2010, the number was at a low level, only about 10,000. surprisingly, within no more than seven years it reached to more than 40,000 in 2016.
some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. first and foremost, china has become particularly active in the economy, which leads to the increasing demand of qualified accountants. in addition, the development of the job market on the whole cannot keep pace with the expansion of college graduates, which obliges a large number of students to stay on campus for another three years to get better prepared for their career. last but not least, working pressure is another reason. taking all these factors into account, we may predict that with speedy development of our society, the number of recruitment of mpacc will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.
on the other side of the coin, however, this tendency may bring about a good many problems, such as the waste of talent. it is necessary for us to take effective measures to ensure this situation doesn’t get out of hand, and encourage students to choose majors with theoretical knowledge and practical skills that will be demanded in the job market.
参考译文
上述图表清楚地揭示，从2020到2016年会计硕士招生人数出现了急剧增长。在2010年，招生人数较少，只有大约10,000人。令人惊讶的是，在不到七年的时间里，2016年的招生人数达到40，000多人。
促成上述变化的一些主要原因可以概括如下。首先，中国的经济已经变得非常活跃，这使得对合格会计的需求增加。此外，就业市场的总体发展无法跟上大学毕业生的增加，这促使很多学生继续在学校深造三年，为就业做更好的准备。最后，工作压力是另外一个原因。考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以预计：随着社会的迅速发展，会计硕士的招生人数在未来十年将会继续增加。
然而，问题的另一方面，这种趋势可能带来很多问题，例如人才的浪费。我们必须采取有效措施确保这一形势不会失控，同时鼓励学生们选择那些就业市场所需要的既有理论知识和又有实践技能的专业。
亮点表达
diagram图表 clearly清晰地 illustrate揭示 dramatic急剧的 elevation上升 occur发生 recruitment招生 master of professional accounting会计硕士 according to根据 statistics数据 conclude得出结论 on a steady rise稳步上升 at a low level处于较低水平 surprisingly令人惊讶的是 reach达到 within在······之内 driving主要的 factor原因 contribute to促成 above-mentioned上述提及的 summarize总结 as follow如下 first and foremost首先 particularly非常 active活跃的 lead to导致 increasing越来越多的 demand需求 qualified高素质的 accountant 会计 job market就业市场 on the whole总体上 keep pace with跟上 expansion扩张 graduate毕业生 oblige迫使 a large number of大量的 get prepared for准备 last but not least最后 working pressure工作压力 take into account考虑到 predict预测 speedy迅速的 keep growing继续增长 forthcoming未来的 decade十年 on the other side of the coin另一方面 tendency趋势 bring about 带来 a good many很多 such as例如 talent人才 take effective measure采取有效措施 ensure确保 get out of hand失控 encourage鼓励 choose选择 major专业 theoretical knowledge理论知识 practical skill实践技能 demand需求
道长点评
考研写作已经7次考察教育这一话题，分别是：2006mba“工程硕士招生”、2008mba“成人高考”、2013-1“大学毕业生的选择”、2013-2大学生兼职、2017-1读书、2018-1选课、2019-2毕业生去向。
佳句拓展
1. there is a recognition that a candidate with a master’s degree will have a competitive advantage over those with only a bachelor’s degree. 普遍公认，硕士学位候选人将比那些只有学士学位的人拥有明显的优势。
2. this is inevitable because we live in a society where one’s income is still determined by the knowledge you possess.我们社会中一个人的收入依然由其所拥有的知识所决定，因此这一点不可避免。
3. with the growing number of college graduates being turned out each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.随着每年毕业的大学毕业生越来越多，就业市场的形势越来越严峻。
第四篇：文化交流
directions:
write an essay based on the following chart. in your writing, you should
1）interpret the chart, and
2）give your comments.
you should write about 150 words on the answer sheet. (15 points)
2010-2016中国艺术团体赴美演出及国内上映的美国电影数量
预测范文
it is apparent from the line graph that the number of times of chinese art groups performing in the u.s. and american movies shown in china both increased between 2010 and 2016. during the seven years, the number of times of chinese art groups performing in the u.s. jumped from 100 to 460, whereas the statistics of american films shown in our country has been on a steady rise from 50 to 180, a rise of 130.
firstly, the fact that people from different countries are attracted to mysterious chinese culture indicates that to some extent a culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared internationally. secondly, a nation’s unique culture can become international through worldwide economic and cultural exchanges. since the trend of globalization becomes irresistible, the increasing cultural exchanges can effectively improve mutual understanding and friendship.
it is my view that national culture as priceless spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished. meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate international culture because those ideas from the other cultures, controversial or even absurd at first sight, can provide a different perspective for us to observe the world in the long run. nevertheless, when we are confronted with a different culture, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and to resist its dark side. only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world multidimensional, colorful and vigorous.
参考译文
曲线图中显而易见，中国艺术团体赴美演出次数和国内上映的美国电影数量在2010年至2016年间均有所增长。在这七年中，中国艺术团体赴美演出的次数从100场增加到460场，而国内上映的美国电影数量从50部增长到180部，增长了130部。
首先，神秘的中国文化吸引了各国人民这一事实表明，在某种程度上一种文化可以在国际范围内被接受、尊重、欣赏和分享。其次，一个民族独特的文化可以通过全球性的经济和文化交流走向世界。由于全球化潮流不可阻挡，所以日益频繁的文化交流可以有效增进相互间的理解和友谊。
在我看来，我们应该保护和珍惜作为无价精神财富的民族文化。同时，我们很有必要推广国际文化，因为来自其他文化的观点虽然乍看起来颇具争议甚至很荒谬，但从长远看来，可以为我们观察世界提供一种不同的视角。尽管如此，我们面临不同文化时应该保持理智，取其精华、去其糟粕。只有这样我们才能积极发展民族文化，并使我们的世界丰富多元、多姿多彩、充满活力。
亮点表达
it is apparent from the line graph that显而易见art groups艺术团体 performing演出the united states美国 jump急剧增加whereas而 has been on a steady rise稳步增加 are attracted to吸引到 mysterious神秘的 indicate证明 to some extent在某种程度上 accept接受 respect尊敬 appreciate欣赏 share分享 internationally在国际上 nation国家 unique独特的 become international走向世界 through通过 worldwide全球性的 economic经济的 cultural exchange文化交流trend趋势 globalization全球化 irresistible不可阻挡的increasing越来越多的 effectively有效地 improve增进 mutual相互间的 understanding理解friendship友谊 it is my view that我认为 national culture民族文化 priceless spiritual treasure无价的精神财富 preserve保存 cherish珍惜 meanwhile同时 there are good reasons to我们很有必要 advocate推广 international culture世界文化 controversial矛盾的 absurd荒谬的 at first sight乍看起来 perspective视角 observe观察 in the long run从长远看来 nevertheless然而 are confronted with面临 sensible enough充满理智 absorb its essence取其精华 resist its dark side去其糟粕promote cultural development positively积极促进文化发展 multidimensional丰富多元 colorful多姿多彩 vigorous充满活力
道长点评
考研写作已经四次考察“文化交流”这一话题，分别是：2002年“文化交流”、2010年英语（一）“文化融合”、2017年英语（二）小作文“介绍中国文化”、2021年英语（一）传统文化（也可以写人生哲理）。
佳句拓展
1. over the course of thousands of years, the chinese people have created their own unique customs and traditions, and passed them on from one generation to the next.在几千年的历程中，中国人民创造了他们独特的习俗和传统，并将其代代相传。
2. in recent decades, however, some people have become increasingly concerned that china’s cultural heritage could become marginalized or even disappear entirely. 然而最近几十年来，一些人已越来越担心中国的文化遗产可能会遭到排挤或者完全消失。
3. whether through kung fu schools in new york, the united states or chinese calligraphy exhibits at the museum in paris, france, many people around the world now have the chance to learn about china’s culture, ensuring that its reach and influence extend well beyond china’s own boarders.无论是通过美国纽约的武术学校，还是法国巴黎博物馆的书法展，现在世界上很多人都有机会了解中国五千年的文化，这样可以确保中国文化的影响力可以越过中国国界，延伸到全球。
第五篇：追星
directions:
write an essay based on the following chart. in your essay, you should
1）interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
2017至2018年关注娱乐明星微博粉丝总人次
预测范文
the chart above clearly demonstrates the total number of fans followers paying close attention to the microblog of entertainment stars from 2017 to 2018. in 2017, the number was at a low level of 12.8 billion, while within one year, it reached 16.7 billion, a rise of 3.9 billion.
undoubtedly, the diagram demonstrates the social phenomenon of idol worship, which is prevalent among the teenagers nowadays. briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize those who excel in appearance or talent. for instance, su bingtian represents the image of a sports hero, whose handsome appearance and unparalleled skills are passionately adored by his sports fans. by contrast, several teenage boys and girls win their fame overnight in a great many contests on tv, which provokes noisy nationwide debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols.
in my opinion, idolatry is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence for either good or bad on the growth of young people. if we simply worship them by imitating their hairstyle or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste a great deal of our time and money, endangering the efficiency of our study or work. on the contrary, if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our role models and us, we will lead a positive and fruitful life. accordingly, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life. (235 words)
参考译文
上述图表清楚地显示了2017至2018年关注娱乐明星微博地粉丝总人次。在2017年，这一数字为128亿，处于较低水平，而在一年的时间中，这一数字达到了167亿，增长了39亿。
毫无疑问，图表反映了一个社会现象：偶像崇拜目前在年轻人中非常盛行。简言之，年轻人往往容易崇拜那些在外表或才华方面极其出色的人。例如，苏炳添代表了体育界英雄的形象，他的英俊外表以及高超能力正是其粉丝们热情追捧的。相比之下，一些少男少女在电视上地很多比赛中一夜成名，这激起全国范围内关于崇拜偶像的意义和危害地热烈讨论。
在我看来，偶像崇拜其实是把双刃剑，对年轻人的成长产生或好或坏的深刻影响。如果我们只是靠模仿偶像发型或一味追逐时尚的方式来崇拜他们，这种痴迷必将浪费我们大量的金钱和时间，危机我们的学习或工作效率。相反，如果我们靠缩小我们和榜样之间的差距来努力提高自己，我们就会拥有积极且硕果累累的生活。因此，我们应当采取后面一种态度来指引我们的人生。
亮点表达
microblog微博
entertainment star娱乐明星
undoubtedly毫无疑问
demonstrate描述
social phenomenon社会现象
idol worship偶像崇拜
prevalent流行的
teenagers青少年
briefly speaking简而言之
are inclined to容易
idolize崇拜
excel in在……方面出色
appearance外表
intelligence才华
talent特长
for instance例如
represent the image of代表…的形象
unparalleled高超的
passionately狂热地
adore仰慕
fans粉丝
by contrast相反
teenage十几岁的
win their fame overnight一夜成名
a great many很多
contest比赛
provoke noisy nationwide debates引起激烈的辩论
the value and harm利与弊
admire钦佩
idolatry偶像崇拜
thought-provoking发人深思的
double-edged sword双刃剑
exert profound influence产生深远的影响
either good or bad或好或坏
imitate模仿
hairstyle发型
pursuing fashions unreasonably毫无理性地追逐时尚
obsession痴迷
waste a great deal of our time and money浪费我们大量的时间和金钱
endanger the efficiency of our study or work影响我们工作和学习的效率
on the contrary相反
endeavor to努力
improve ourselves提升自我
bridge the gap弥合差距
model偶像
lead a positive and fruitful life过一种积极富有成果的生活
accordingly因此
latter attitude后者的态度
adopt采纳
道长点评
2005年，湖南卫视开始红遍全国，当年的“超女大赛”使李宇春、周笔畅、张靓颖、何洁等超女一夜成名，同年的韩剧《大长今》也风靡全国。2006年，考研写作因此考察“偶像崇拜”这一话题。2021年，追星这一话题再次成为舆论的焦点，希望考生引起重视。
经典句型
1.they are in the spotlight, renowned or notorious; they are the topic of ordinary people who like to know everything about them. 他们身处聚光灯下，或声名显赫，或臭名昭著，他们是那些想要了解一切的普通人口中的谈资。
2.since film stars and pop singers are newsworthy figures, and their stories draws far more attention than those of other people, it is natural that the press tries to attract them to buy their magazines by featuring private lives of famous people. 由于电影明星和流行歌手是有新闻报道价值的人物，他们的故事比其他人的能吸引更多的关注。因此新闻界自然努力吸引读者购买以报道名人隐私为特色的的杂志。
第六篇：教育文化类—压力
directions:
write an essay based on the following chart. in your essay, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
预测范文
the column chart above clearly reflects the number of hours students spending in studying per day in a certain primary school between 2010 and 2020. from 2010 to 2013, the figure climbed gradually from 6.5 to 7, a rise of merely 0.5. it jumped markedly from 7 to 10 between 2013 and 2020.
for the majority of people, stress is a fact of life. as an illustration, school time can be a period of constant pressure for students. factors like upcoming examinations and endless assignments can exert a strong influence on young people’s mental health. primary school students, who have to juggle daily courses, homework and frequent exams, are particularly susceptible to pressure.
in my opinion, by maintaining a healthy lifestyle, keeping an organized calendar and knowing when to relax, people can successfully manage and reduce their stress. to begin with, the most fundamental way that we can mitigate stress is to maintain a healthy lifestyle, which includes adequate sleep, proper exercise and a balanced diet. in addition, students need to relax by watching movies, listening to music, reading a magazine, or chatting with friends. (185 words)
参考译文
上幅柱状图清楚地反映了2010年至2020年某小学学生每天学习地小时数。从2010至2013年，学习时间从6.5小时缓慢上升至7小时，仅增加了0.5小时。从2013年至2020年，学习时间从7小时显著增长到10小时。
对大多数人而言，压力是需要面的的现实。例如，学生时代对学生而言是一个压力源源不断的时期。即将来临的考试和无尽的作业等因素会对年轻人的心理健康产生强烈的影响，尤其是小学生更易受到压力的影响，因为他们需要同时应对每天的课程、作业和频繁的考试。
在我看来，通过保持健康的生活方式、合理安排日程和适时放松，人们可以成功地管理压力并减少压力。首先，缓解压力的根本之道在于保持健康的生活方式，包括充足的睡眠、适量的运动和均衡的饮食。其次，人们需要通过看电影、听音乐、读杂志、与朋友聊天等方式放松。
亮点表达
column chart柱状图
primary school小学
figure数据
climb gradually缓慢增加
merely只有
on the contrary相反
jump markedly急剧增加
the majority of people大多数人
as an illustration例如
constant不断的
stressor压力源
upcoming即将来临的
endless assignment无尽的作业
take a toll造成损失
academic performance学业
juggle应对
academic work学业
romantic relationship恋爱关系
busy social calendar繁忙的社交日程
growing financial responsibility日益增长的经济责任
job hunting就业
graduation毕业
social commitment社会责任
are particularly susceptible to更容易
maintain a healthy lifestyle保持健康的生活方式
keep organized合理安排日程
knowing when to relax适时放松
successfully manage成功管理
reduce their stress减少压力
to begin with首先
the most fundamental way根本之道
mitigate stress缓解
adequate sleep充足睡眠
sufficient exercise适量运动
a balanced diet合理膳食
in addition其次
relaxation time放松时间
in a bid to为了
release their stress缓解压力
道长点评
考研写作已经7次考察教育这一话题，分别是：2016年mba工程硕士招生，2008年mba成人高考，2013年英语（一）大学毕业生选择，2013年英语（二）大学生兼职，2017年英语（一）读书，2018年英语（一）选课，2019年英语（二）毕业生去向。
经典句型
1.those who are skeptical of this fact argue that involvement in non-scholastic activities reduces the amount of time students spend studying, thus adversely affecting their grades.
有些人对此事表示怀疑，认为参加非学术活动会减少学生的学习时间，因此会对他们的学习成绩产生不利影响。
2.however, spending an appropriate amount of time participating in sports, clubs or volunteer work can actually be an excellent way for students to relieve everyday stress.
然而，花适当的时间来参与各种体育活动、俱乐部及志愿者工作对学生来说是一种很好的减压方式。
3.in turn, they will be able to work more efficiently and effectively in their studies and attain better results in the exams.
相应地，他们在学习过程中会更有效率，获得更好的考试成绩。
王江涛考研英语（二）小作文
第一篇：告示
directions:
the students’ union of your department is planning a chinese speaking contest. write an announcement which covers the following information:
1) the purpose of the contest,
2) time and place of the contest,
3) what is required of the candidates,
4) details of the judges and awards.
you should write about 100 words. do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. use department of chinese language and literature at the end of the announcement.
预测范文
chinese speaking contest
december 25, 2021
to improve students’ ability to speak chinese and enrich after-class activities, the students’ union of department of chinese language and literature is organizing a school-wide chinese speaking contest to be held on saturday next week (january 1) at the students’ auditorium. those who are interested in taking part the contest may sign up with their class monitor before tuesday next week. five professors will be invited to be judges. the first six winners will be given awards. everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.
the students’ union
department of chinese language and literature
参考译文
中文演讲比赛
2021年12月25日
为提高同学们中文演讲的能力并丰富课外活动，中文系学生会将于下周六（1月1日）在学生大礼堂组织一场全校中文演讲比赛。有兴趣参加的同学请于下周二之前在本班班长处报名。我们将邀请五位教授担任评委，并将给前六名获奖者颁奖。欢迎大家积极参加。
中文系学生会
亮点表达
chinese-speaking contest中文演讲比赛department of chinese language and literature中文系december 12月improve提高 ability能力enrich丰富 after-class activities课外活动 the students’ union学生会organize组织 school-wide全国性的to be held将要举行 saturday周六 january一月 auditorium大礼堂 be interested in感兴趣 take part in参加 sign up with报名monitor班长 tuesday周二 professor教授 invite邀请 judge评委 first前 winner获奖者 award奖励 welcome欢迎 present参加
道长点评
考研写作已经四次考察告示，分别是：2010-1招募启事、2015-2招募启事、2016-1图书馆告示、2020-1比赛通告。告示是公告性应用文。机关、团体或个人如有事需要向公众说明或请求 助，可将要说的事简要写成告示张贴。如特别重要或涉及范围较广，还可以登报。标题写在上方正中，日期放在标题右下方，一般不用称呼。
佳句拓展
1. priority and preference will be given to those experienced, either in international conference or in other similar activities. 在国际会议或其他类似活动中具有相关经验者优先考虑。
2. call 86754321 or send messages to postgr_ass@ccc.edu.cn for an application and for information on the interview. 你可以向我们的行政办公室提交书面申请或通过 englishclub@163.com 发送电子邮件。
3. enquiries are encouraged but visits declined. 欢迎垂询，谢绝来访。
第二篇：订购信
directions: you are preparing for an english test and are in need of some reference books. write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for：
1）detailed information about the books you want,
2）methods of payment,
3）time and way of delivery
预测范文
dear sir or madam,
as i am planning to take the national entrance test of english for ma/ms candidates(netem), i have decided to place an order for some netem books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
firstly, please give me detailed information as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. secondly, i also need to know the terms of payment and after-sale service. thirdly, i wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by express mail service to the headquarters of beijing new oriental school by december 25, 2021. i have arranged to pay for the service.
i would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. i look forward to hearing from you soon.
yours sincerely,
li ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生或女士：
由于我计划参加全国硕士研究生入学英语考试，充分考虑到贵书店的良好声誉和所售书籍的高品质，我决定订购一些考研书籍。
首先，请告诉我关于这些书籍的书名、作者、出版社、价格的详细信息。其次，我也想知道付款方式和售后服务。第三，我想知道是否您方便在12月25日之前把这些书通过邮政特快专递寄到北京 学校总部。我已经安排了为这项服务付款。
感谢您好心考虑我的请求。我期待尽快收到您的回信。
您真诚的，
李明
亮点表达
plan计划 take参加 national全国的 entrance入学 test考试 ma文学硕士（master of arts） ms理学硕士（master of science） candidate候选人 decide决定 reputation声誉 bookstore书店 quality质量 particularly详细的 account信息 as regards关于 author作者 publishing house出版社 price价格 terms of payment付款方式 after-sell service售后服务 wonder想知道 convenient方便的 deliver邮寄 headquarters总部 oriental东方的 september九月 arrange安排 pay付款 would like to想要 express表达 gratitude感激 kind好心的 request请求 look forward to期待
道长点评
2005至2009年教育部出版的《英语大纲》中，小作文唯一的大纲样题就是订购信。订购信属于询问信的一种，询问信用于咨询信息或寻求 助，首先进行简要的自我介绍，其次提供背景资料及询问原因，结尾应彬彬有礼，表达自己的谢意。
佳句拓展
1. i would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects.如您能为我提供有关下列方面的资料，我将不胜感激。
2. i would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures i have to go through.如果您能告知我那些必须经过的程序，我将不胜感激。
3.could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? 您能否寄给我有关上述方面的相关小册子呢？
第三篇：推荐信
directions:
write a letter to a friend of yours to a friend of yours to recommend one of your favorite movies, and give reasons for your recommendation.
预测范文
dear michael,
as one of your closest friends, i’m writing the letter in purpose of recommending one of my favorite movies to you, around the world in eighty days.
the primary factors for my recommendation are as follows. for one thing, this is a movie of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an english gentleman, mr. phileas fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and managers to travel around the world in eighty days. for another, it gives us a vivid description of the difficulties and incidents which happen in his journey.
wish you enjoy the movie. looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li ming
参考译文
迈克尔：
作为你最好的朋友之一，我写这封信的目的是给你推荐我最喜欢的电影之一：《八十天环游地球》。
我推荐它的主要原因如下。首先，它是一部科幻电影，讲述了一位英国绅士激动人心的故事。菲利亚·福克先生跟他的俱乐部伙伴及经理打赌在八十天之内环游地球。其次，这部电影生动描述了他在旅途中遇到的各种困难和发生的故事。
希望你喜欢这部电影。期待着你的回信。
李明
亮点表达
closest friend最好的朋友 recommend推荐 favorite最喜爱的 around the world in eighty days 《八十天环游地球》 primary factor主要原因 recommendation推荐 as follows如下 for one thing一方面 science fiction 科幻小说 exciting激动人心的 gentleman绅士 makes a bet打赌 clubmate俱乐部伙伴 manager经理 for another另一方面 vivid description生动描述 incident事件 journey旅途
道长点评
本题其实是2011-1小作文真题，也可以仿写推荐书。考研写作已经四次考察推荐信，分别是：2011-1推荐电影、2015-1推荐书、2017-1推荐景点、2020-2推荐景点。推荐信首段应开宗明义；次段客观介绍相关情况，以便对方更全面了解；尾段希望对方考虑自己的推荐。语气应真诚、一心一意；信的内容应符合事实，不应夸大其词或过度夸奖。应清楚表明自己作为推荐人的态度，或毫无保留或有所保留。
佳句拓展
1. i am very glad to recommend to you a former student of mine, mr. zhang wei, to be a candidate for the post.我很高兴向您推荐我的学生张伟，他正在申请这个职位。
2. there is little doubt that miss xiaolongnv is sufficient prepared for the position she is applying for and i support her application without reservation.毫无疑问，小龙女小姐完全有资格胜任该职位，我毫无保留地推荐她。
3. i should appreciate it very much if you would take into consideration his application.如果您能考虑他的申请，我将非常感谢。
第四篇：祝贺信
directions:
write an email to one of your friends, zhang wuji, to congratulate him on graduation.
预测范文
dear wuji,
congratulations upon having received your doctorate in philosophy from yale university. i know this has meant years of study and hard work on your part, and it is an achievement you can well be proud of.
i have followed your progress with pleasure and interest for many years. i am sure, from the fine record you have made, that you will be a success in whatever you undertake. no doubt you are tired after the strain of the past few months, and if you would like to come to my hometown for a few weeks this summer, we’d be very happy to have you.
i’d certainly enjoy hearing about your plans, now that you have completed your college course. think it over, and let me know.
yours faithfully,
li ming
参考译文
亲爱的无忌：
祝贺你取得了耶鲁大学哲学博士学位。这是你自己多年来刻苦学习的结果。这也是你引以为傲的成就。
多年来，我一直以愉快、关切的心情关注着你的进步。从你获得的良好成绩来看，我深信，不管你从事什么工作，你都会获得成功。毫无疑问，过去几个月的紧张学习一定使你很疲倦。今年夏天，如果你愿意到我家乡来度过几个星期，我们将非常高兴地欢迎你。
现在你既然读完了大学课程，我当然乐于倾听你今年夏季的打算。可以考虑一下，然后告诉我。
李明
亮点表达
congratulation祝贺 receive取得 doctorate博士学位 philosophy哲学 yale university耶鲁大学 mean意味着 years of多年的 hard work努力工作 on your part你自己 achievement结果 be proud of 自豪 follow注视 progress进步 pleasure愉快 interest关切 fine record良好成绩 success成功 whatever无论什么 undertake从事 no doubt毫无疑问 tired疲倦的 strain紧张 certainly必然地 plan计划 complete完成 course课程 think over考虑 faithfully真诚地
道长点评
2011年英语（二）小作文曾考察祝贺信，祝贺表弟入学。在西方，当得知某位朋友即将订婚、结婚或生子的时候，或某位朋友得到荣誉或奖赏时，往往会立即写信祝贺。要求真诚自然、亲切动人、鼓舞人心、尽情发挥。
句型拓展
1. it is the most joyful news i have ever heard for a long time. 这是我长期以来听到的最愉快的消息。
2. you have no idea what a great pleasure i got when i heard the news.你可能不知道我听到这消息时是多么的快乐。
3. i hear that you have graduated from princeton university and that you made very fine record for yourself there.听说你已从普林斯顿大学毕业了，还听说你在哪里的学习成绩很好。
第五篇：投诉信
directions:
you have recently returned from a trip. however, you were dissatisfied with the service you received at the hotel where you were visiting.
write a letter to the manager of the hotel. give details of when you stayed, explain why you were unhappy with the service and say what you’d like to be done about it.
预测范文
dear sir or madam,
i write to express my dissatisfaction with the service i received while staying at your hotel during my vacation between th
e 2nd and 11st of april this year.
although your hotel is rated as a five-star one, i found that the rooms were not cleaned on a daily basis, and that my bed was made up only every three days. in addition, the food in the restaurant was similarly disappointing. not only was it extremely overpriced, but the quality was very poor. i was therefore forced to have to eat out in the local restaurants.
i trust you will take my complaints seriously, and make every effort to improve your service in the future. i would greatly appreciate a discount on my bill (receipt enclosed). i look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
yours sincerely,
li ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生或女士：
今年4月2日至11日的假期期间我曾住在贵饭店。我写信是为了表达对于贵饭店服务的不满。
尽管贵饭店被评为五星级饭店，但我发现客房并非每天都有人打扫，我的床每三天才被整理一次。此外，餐厅的食物也同样令人失望。不但价格过高，而且质量很差。因此我被迫外出在当地饭店就餐。
我相信您会认真对待我的投诉，并会在将来尽力改善饭店的服务。您若给我的账单打个折扣（附上收据），我将非常感谢。期待您得便时尽早给我圆满的答复。
您真诚的，
李明
亮点表达
express表达
dissatisfaction不满
service服务
receive受到
hotel饭店
vacation假期
march三月
although尽管
rate评级
five star五星
clean清洁
on a daily basis每天
make up整理
in addition此外
restaurant饭店
similarly同样地
disappointing令人失望的
not only不但
extremely非常
overprice价格过高
quality质量
poor差
therefore因此
be forced to被迫
eat out外出就餐
local当地的
trust相信
complaint投诉
seriously认真地
make every effort to尽力
improve改进
in the future将来
greatly非常
discount折扣
bill账单
receipt收据
enclose附上
favorable圆满的
reply答复
at your earliest convenience尽快
道长点评
2012-2考研写作曾考察过投诉信，投诉网店的电子辞典质量问题。2002年1月四级写作曾考察投诉大学的食堂服务，2004年6月六级写作曾考察投诉书店的服务。投诉信首先要引出你要投诉的内容，其次表达你对此事所带来不便的感受和心情，第二段一般说明投诉原因，第三段提出建议措施或解决方案，最后对有关人员做出的努力表示感谢。
句型拓展
1. we will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.我们对您愿意补偿损失表示赞赏。
2. i wish to refer you to an incident which occurred in your restaurant, calling for some remedial actions.我想告知您发生在贵饭店的一件事，希望您采取一些补救措施。
3. i am writing to you in the hope that you could do me a favor to improve the horrible situation.我现在写信给您希望改进现状。
第六篇：建议信
directions:
write an email to your university to suggest setting network cables in students’ dormitories.
预测范文
to whom it may concern,
as a student at our university, i should first commend you for the additional computers that you have recently added to the computer rooms. i am writing to you to request that the internet be installed in the dormitories.
as you know, the internet has become an increasingly important tool at university. not only do professors require students to use it for research, but much communication is done between professors and students through email as well. in addition, some professors are beginning to post their lecture notes online for students to review in their spare time.
while there are a few computer labs with internet access throughout campus, with over 20,000 students living in the dorms, there is a great need for more internet access areas. thank you for your time.
yours sincerely,
li ming
参考译文
致有关人士：
作为本校的一名大学生，我首先很赞赏您最近为机房另外配置电脑的行动。我写信给您恳请在宿舍里安装互联网。
想必您也知道，互联网已经变成大学生活中很重要的一种工具。不仅教授们要求学生们使用网络进行科研调查，而且教授和学生间的很多沟通也是通过电子邮件完成的。此外，有些教授开始将自己的课堂讲义传到网上，供学生们在业余时间复习。
整个学校配备网络的机房数量不多，而住宿学生达两万多名，所以学生对更多网络的接入有很大的需求。谢谢您抽时间阅读我的邮件。
您真诚的，
李明
亮点表达
commend赞赏
additional另外的
computer电脑
recently近来
computer room机房
request恳请
internet互联网
install安装
dormitory宿舍
world wide web互联网
increasingly越来越
tool工具
professor教授
require要求
research研究
communication联系
through通过
in addition此外
post张贴
lecture课堂
note笔记
review复习
lab实验室
access使用
throughout遍及
campus校园
over超过
dorm宿舍
道长点评
考研写作已经10次考察建议信，占考查书信的五分之一，这是考生最应该关注的书信。分别是20007、2008、2009、2011-2、2012-1、2014-1、2016-2、2018-2、2019-2、2021-1。需要注意的是，这也是最难写的书信，每种建议信写法不同，切勿通篇全是空话模板，一定要结合题目提一些具体的建议。
佳句拓展
1.i am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。
2.i hope you find these proposals useful. 我希望您发现这些建议有用。
3.i trust you will take my suggestions into account. 我相信您会考虑我的建议。
